These haikus are written by one of my grade 4 students. He has successfully followed the syllable pattern. He has also used the appropriate vocabulary to write about the topics he has chosen. Finally, by writing haikus that make sense, he has exceeded my expectations of a grade 4 student. …
This short fable is written by one of my grade 6 students. He conveys his message through the animal characters very vividly. He uses the events in the story to clearly convey the theme that one should never give up. He also has written a descriptive story that is interesting …
These two song analyses are written by one of my grade 12 students. The writer has analyzed the song “Baba O’Riley” using two different literary criticism approaches, namely new historicism and Marxist point of view. She has successfully referred to parts in the song that can support her interpretation of …
Tagging ourselves with a label will not make us a believer as a true believer is the one who, having grasped the essence of the belief, cherry-picks laws that unite humanity, rather than divide it. Blind adherence to any certain set of rules is divisive; it is the everlasting quest …
This graph description is written by one of my IELTS students. She has written a concise and organized description of the task without interpreting the data. She has started by introducing the graph and one of the main ideas. She has not only compared the various factors but also has …
This research essay is written by one of my grade 11 students. The essay presents three well-researched reasons as to why women tend to use social media more often than men do. The essay follows the rules of a standard five-paragraph essay, which is an acceptable format for high school. …
This book review is written by one of my grade 7 students. The writer has written a clear introduction, which includes a synopsis that does not reveal the ending. He successfully focuses on various parts of the story, such as plot, suspense, characterization, and the writing style, before finally specifying …
This personal argumentative essay is written by one of my grade 7 students. He has written the whole piece from a personal point of view instead of a second person or third person point of view, neither of which is acceptable for this type of assignment. He has clearly referred …
This film review is written by one of my grade 7 students. It has a unique title, which attracts readers’ attention even before they get to the hook. The writer summarizes the film but makes sure he doesn’t give away the ending. He then provides some comments on the cast …
This personal narrative is written by one of my grade 7 students. The narrative is very detailed and contains some literary devices, which make it more interesting to read. The sudden feeling of regret that the writer experiences when he looks at the photos, unable to find himself in any of them, can resonate with many young teenagers, who may prefer playing on their electronic devices to spending time with their families. Finally, instead of presenting a sweet cliché moral at the end, the narrative ends with a sense of regret, which, for sure, can have a more powerful impact on the readers.
