This well-researched argumentative essay is written by one of my grade 10 students. The essay presents three well-researched reasons as to why the Ontario government must increase the minimum wage. The essay follows the rules of a standard five-paragraph essay, which is an acceptable format for high school. The essay …
This essay is written by one of my grade 8 students. The essay presents well-researched reasons as to why schizophrenia patients should not be stigmatized. The writer starts with a vivid description of an incident to draw the readers’ attention and then goes on to present her thesis, which clearly …
This research essay is written by one of my grade 11 students. The essay presents three well-researched reasons as to why women tend to use social media more often than men do. The essay follows the rules of a standard five-paragraph essay, which is an acceptable format for high school. …
This personal argumentative essay is written by one of my grade 7 students. He has written the whole piece from a personal point of view instead of a second person or third person point of view, neither of which is acceptable for this type of assignment. He has clearly referred …
This argumentative essay is written by one of my grade 6 students. The essay presents three reasons why people should wear their glasses. The essay follows the rules of a standard five-paragraph essay. There is a clear thesis statement with three subtopics, each body paragraph starts with a clear topic …
This standard five-paragraph essay is written by one of my ESL-E grade 9 students. She has clearly mentioned her subtopics in a parallel structure in the introduction. She has also followed the rules of unity and coherence, discussing only one issue per paragraph. Each paragraph also begins with a short clear topic sentence. Each point also is supported by a number of specific examples and details, which makes the essay very convincing. Finally, she ends the essay by making an appeal to all teenagers to put away their cell phones and live a healthy life.
