This argumentative essay is written by one of my grade 7 students. Her thesis statement is clear and is supported by relevant details. She has extensively researched the topic and has kept an objective and factual tone in supporting her stance on the issue.
This commentary, based on a passage from Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte, is written by one of my grade 11 IB students. The writer focuses on Mr. Broklehurst’s level of hypocrisy, proving it by analysing the devices that Bronte has applied in the excerpt. He has focused on three literary devices, namely irony, imagery, and allusion, to prove how hypocritical Mr. Broklehurst is.
This short story is written by one of my grade 10 students, whose pen name is Vagus Truman. His short story reveals the ambivalent feelings in teenagers, who at times may question the purpose and meaning in all their experiences, hoping to create an original meaning in their lives. He has vividly portrayed the dilemma that the main character is faced with. The imagery and descriptiveness bring the whole story to life.
This short story is written by one of my grade 10 students. The short story reveals the thoughts and regrets of a teenager about friendship. The writer’s creative wording in his short story has made the piece interesting to read. Also, the description and imagery help characterize the main character …
This persuasive essay is written by one of my grade 10 students. She has presented her arguments against indulging in social media. She has successfully applied the rhetorical appeals to persuade the readers. The rhetorical devices, the vivid imagery, the literary devices, and the occasional first and second person perspectives have made it all an engaging essay.
This script, which is accompanied by google slides, is written by one of my grade 7 students. The script sounds lively and friendly. He has an effective introduction to begin and an effective conclusion to wrap up the presentation. He uses numerous transitions to move to the next slide. He has also used effective visuals and keywords on the slides to help the audience follow his presentation. The slides are not crowded and are easy to follow. He has also included relevant pictures and charts on the slides and makes numerous references to them in his script.
This personal essay is written by one of my grade 10 students. In his essay, he has made very clear references to his personal experiences and observations. The various sections of the essay fit well, making the essay to run smoothly. He has also used various literary devices, such as …
This short story is written by one of my grade 6 students. The story touches on a very important theme, which may resonate with many students. The writer vividly expresses the frustration and the sadness in the character’s voice. There is a lot of imagery and characterization in this …
These two paragraphs are written by one of my grade 7 students. She has written an informative and a persuasive piece on the British Shorthair breed. She has tried to remain factual and impersonal in the informative piece, and very emotional and personal in the persuasive piece.
This literary essay is written by one of my grade 11 students. He has presented a very enlightening thesis statement, stating the dire consequences of narcissism. He has critically analyzed “The Chaser” by John Collier, extracting some of the most important messages that the author has tried to convey in his story. He has included very clear quotes from the novel and provided accurate explanations and conclusions.